I have set a new goal for myself. I am going to write 100 words a day, five days a week. It doesn’t seem like a lot, but every little bit helps. I also find that once I start I end up doing a lot more than the 100 words. However, having a smaller goal makes it seem like a managable bite. So far in revisions I have added about 7,000 words (23 pages) of dialoge, character advancement, and explanations. It will be a much more solid story when I am done. (and ready for the next revision round;) . )
There's Magic in Story, 